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Post by SIMBA CRAWFORD on Aug 5, 2012 10:17:47 GMT -8
i don't need a parachute
name: Simba Henley Crawford alias: Simba gender: Female age: Eighteen birthday: November 1st position: Local sexuality: Bisexual player: Bee
hand behind my neck
eyes: Dark hazel hair: Long half back length black hair. skin: typical skin tone and any small notes height: 5ft5 build: Slender and toned. Simba has a fairly agile physique to match her height. A dainty face yet with strong features, rouge lips contrast with her smouldering eyes. marks: 4 piercings in each ear, cartilage in left and spiral helix in her right. Right nose is pierced, along with naval and her tongue. She has a globe tattoo on her palm and the word OBEY along the side of her left middle finger. face: Kendall Jenner
don't trust anyone but me
Simba is the party hard type chick. she drinks almost everyday but never gets drunk unless she is out at a party. she could care less of what you think of her. she does what she wants, when she pleases whether her parents approve or not. Simba loves her friends and would do anything for them but just don't get to close, she'll end up taking everything you have if you screw her over. she loves to flirt with men and women, no shame to her game.
i won't tell anybody
Having done rather well at school, she proved to be doing well. Decent grades and attention to detail, until finding the wrong set of people. Steering her separate way in life, Simba styled herself as a typical outcast. A unique dress sense and attitude. She took up smoking weed and drinking, both in vast amounts. Growing bored with school life, she began to rebel and just not care for anything but fun. Being kicked out, she lives to party now. Despite all this, she does hold down jobs from modelling to working in a skate shop.
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BEEBEE
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all i heard was nothing
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Post by BEEBEE on Aug 5, 2012 12:38:10 GMT -8
There are just a few things to fix before Simba can be accepted. You missed the skin section in Simba's appearance. Her personality and history also need to be expanded. With the personality, all sentences should start with a capital letter and I'd merely like to know more about how she thinks and acts. Outside of drinking, what does she like to do? Or wishes she could do? In her mind, what counts as screwing her over? Just try to flesh her out to the reader a little more. With the history, I want to know where she comes from. Was she born in Villa? What happened before she started partying other than her grades in school? Where does she work in a tiny town like Villa?
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